Continued from the previous part here.
The TV channels had been abuzz with Industrialist Ajay Raj’s life imprisonment term. The CBI investigation had revealed a Bank locker in the name of his deceased second wife Nita containing shocking details of Ajay’s illegal dealings. He was arrested with charges of murder of Nita.
Tia sat on the cane chair sipping wine. The gorgeous view of the sea made her nostalgic.

“Lawyer Misra has sent across the papers. You’re now the legal owner of your mother’s empire.”
Tia smiled at the lady with gratitude.
Ajay had killed Anu for her property. However, Anu had outsmarted Ajay by naming the then eight-year-old Tia as the official heir to her property. If anything happened to Tia until she turned eighteen, the property was to be handed over to a trust.
Except Anu and lawyer Misra, only Anu’s best friend Nita had known about this will. Nita had stepped in to protect Tia by marrying Ajay.
Tia had turned eighteen last month. Knowing that Ajay had been planning to get rid of her next, Nita and Tia had devised a plan of faking Nita’s death. It had not only saved Tia but together they had managed to avenge Anu’s murder.
(199 words)
This is the 11th post written as part of the #MyfriendAlexa campaign as per my theme ‘Shades of Perception’. This is a sequel of the 10th post that can be read here. Link to the remaining nine posts is here.
For this challenge, I am using four photos as prompts to weave two flash fiction stories and one real story behind the picture. This is my second picture prompt.
Great writing! I love how short yet impactful your articles are!
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Thank you for the kind words
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Lots of devious and cunning scheming here! But glad things worked out in Tia’s favour and her father couldn’t harm her.
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I’m glad that I could make them win. Thank you for reading Anshu.
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Very well written. You’re a master of fiction stories Sonia:)
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Thank you so much for the kind words
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ooh, i liked the twist. But so much masala here. Why wrap it up like this? I can totally imagine a confrontation scene at the jail where Tia reveals some cryptic clues. Also, how did they do it? i am nitpicking here but if someone reads it back to back as I did, Tia’s thoughts from the first part don’t make sense.
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Thank you for reading and sharing your feedback. Actually the theme I had chosen for My Friend Alexa is Shades of Perception which means I weave two flash fiction stories in two different genres around the same picture prompt. Until now, all the stories were stand alone plots. Since this one had an open ending climax in the previous part, I had to give it a closure. The previous one was in the genre of mystery and hence I had to change the genre to women in this ensuring they triumph over evil. The word limit was 200 which is why I had to end it with Ajay’s arrest. If there was a third part, it would have had the confrontation scenes but I have to leave it here.
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Ooh, very interesting! I went back and read the previous story too. Really like how you built this story up.
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Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it.
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What a smartly planned plot. Kudos to Nita for being such a protective friend. Glad the story ended on a positive note.
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Thank you for reading Vartika.
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Nice… Now I will go back and read all.. Weekend reading sorted
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Pls read and let me know your thoughts after you finish.
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Wow what a twist and turns…my goodness you are master of fiction no doubt and big hug to your skill
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Thank you for reading and the extremely kind words.
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All good.. But faked death ?? I know it is a story. But I think Nita could have remained dead 🤔. Like, a mistake while implementing the plan you know 🤗
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Since the genre had to change (as per the requirements of my theme for My Friend Alexa), I decided to make it women. Couldn’t let anyone die to make sure they triumph over evil finally.
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Interesting!! I like the way Tia and Nita did it all, to outsmart the smart you have to go beyond the usual way! great stoyr
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Thank you for the kind words
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I’m reading one by one.. On 4th post now. I will come to this soon 🙂
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Sure Sanjota. Let me know your thoughts after reading.
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Nice use of the prompt. Read the first part of it before this. I didn’t expect such an ending with great twist. Great narration. Keep going.
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Thank you for reading.
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Murder mysteries can be mind boggling. Ah! the way human mind works, is quite a paradox.
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Very true. Thanks for reading.
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oh, your limit of words killed me. I so wanted to know more about how the two ladies accomplished their plans. You have the knack to grip the reader through your words. Well done!!!
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Thank you for reading. Means a lot m
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