Mir Rehman walked inside his office room in the palace.
The rumors about the palace being haunted had led to a decline in visitors. But having worked as a Diwan for 38 years here, Mir rubbished such claims.
Of late his relation with Amir Ali, the last Nawab had become sour. Amir’s obsession with alcohol and women had been eating into the palace’s revenues.

The creaking of the door made Mir observe Amir’s entry with another man.
“Anjan, finalize the hotel deal and give me the money.”
Anjan said, “What did you do to Mir who had threatened to inform the local police about your unlawful activities?”
“I killed him in his sleep and rolled his dead body down the stairs outside. The police and the local doctor helped me cover it up as an accident from tripping.”
But Anjan had turned pale on spotting a ledger in the air, held without any support.
Next morning, the newspapers carried details of Nawab Amir Ali and liquor baron Anjan Seth’s demises. Amir had a fatal fall from the stairs while Anjan had passed away from a heart attack.
For Mir Rehman, it was work as usual in his corner office room.
(199 words)
This is the first post written as part of the #MyfriendAlexa campaign as per my theme ‘Shades of Perception’.
For this challenge, I will be using four photos as prompts to weave two flash fiction stories and one real story behind the picture. Stay tuned to read the second flash fiction that I will write around the same picture in my next post. You could also consider subscribing to my blog if you like reading my stories.
The story is wonderful. Never guessed until the end. All the best for #MyFriendAlexa campaign
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Thank you Ramya. Glad you liked it.
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A vengeful ghost and a wastrel master. Nice photo prompt.
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Thank you Lavanya
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Creepy. Paranormal story aren’t easy to write. Well written, Sonia.
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Thank you Priya. Means a lot.
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Nicely written. I love these stories with heritage and mystery behind them.
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Thank you so much.
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An interesting twist in the plot. Enjoyed reading it
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Thank you Huma. Glad you liked it
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Well written. These are the kind of flash fiction that deserve to be made into Youtube shorts! 🙂
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This made my day. Thank you for reading.
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Sonia, as usual, a nice ploy with a picture. I am more curious to read the real ones from your next post. Wait mode on.
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Thank you Mahesh. I’m glad to know that you liked it. The next one will be a fiction and then I will narrate the personal angle.
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Just too good Sonia 🙂 Cheers !
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Thank you Arindam
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Wooh! Interesting read, Sonia. You amaze with everytime by writing on different genres. Good luck for Alexa
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Thank you Vartika. It is friends like you whose encouragement keeps me going.
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Ah! The ghost of someone who was sincere in his job is not to be trifled with. Nice one, Sonia. Good to see you dabble in different genres. Keep them coming.
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Thank you Varad. Of late I have started enjoying flash fiction and fiction both. Thank you for creating the fiction writers village group. I would have never known about FFfAW or Friday Fictioneers without it.
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Oh ho …. That creepy ending !! Now Mir will get two more ghost friends (rather enemies) for his company. 😂
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That is a very interesting observation. You give me ideas for a sequel.
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😂
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Evil people meet an evil end! Good story, Sonia! I like revenge stories and when it’s a ghost revenging his death, it makes it all the more interesting.
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So glad you liked it Anshu. Your comments motivate me to write better.
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Loved that last line :). All the best with your blog and your writing–I love that you’re doing flash fiction as part of the initiative.
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Thank you Damyanti. Of late I discovered my love for telling stories. Been trying to hone up my skills. Thanks for reading.
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Oops. I hope he returns home soon. Everything is going to be fine. Don’t worry.❤️❤️
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Wonderfully written Sonia. Thoroughly enjoyed the spookiness.
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Thank you Jaya for reading.
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Whoa! That’s a solid twist in the end. You have weaved a nice and short spooky tale, Sonia.
https://www.rohankachalia.com/2018/09/payback-part-1/
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Thank you Rrohan. I’m glad that you liked it.
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Very well written! Spooky tale! Keep going girl! #SurReads
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Thank you for reading.
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Absolutely brilliant Sonia. Chilling end!
Look forward to your series. The premise that you have chosen is so interesting and intriguing. I am sure to have a treat here on your blog . Eagerly look forward to next post.
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Thank you Anagha. I am trying to make it interesting. Glad you liked it.
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Wow…amazing Sonia. You have a knack for bone-chilling thrillers. Loved it.
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Thank you Kalpana for being so encouraging of my stories. Means a lot.
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Wrong time to read this post, Sonia! And, you know, just sometime back I heard noises coming from god knows where so I looked around the house to check, with my heart thumping. And, now I had to read this!!
I just hope hubby returns home soon now and I sleep peacefully tonight! 😛
You bad bad girl! 😛
❤
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Now that one surprised me – I did NOT see it coming! ::applause:: I have always thought that ghosts, if ghosts exist, would have little reason to be other than they were in life, neither good nor evil. It might be akin to having the power (and, dare I say, frustration) of invisibility. If it also came with the ability to walk through walls AND give someone a mighty shove, it could be fun.
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Thank you Holly for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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You know you have this knack of punching intrigue and drama with few words at your disposal. Well done!😊👍🏽
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Thank you Richa. You made my day extra special.
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What a spooky ending to a fast-paced tale, Sonia! You have a way with words. Kudos. #DeepTiesReads #MyFriendAlexa
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Thank you Ma’am. This means a lot coming from a writer who I admire.
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Thank you for that kind comment, Sonia. I am honoured!
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That end is wonderful, never guessed it coming. Happy Alexa Month.
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Thank you Tina. Glad you liked it. Happy Alexa month to you too.
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Wow! That was really creepy. Waiting to read the other perception of the same image. Dumbfounded!
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Thank you Anu for always being encouraging.
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Loved it, Sonia! A twist in the tale I never expected! Awesome!
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Thank you Mayuri.
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Intriguing theme Sonia. Horrifically narrated🤗
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Thank you for reading Namratha.
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Spooky and quite unpredictable. An honest man continues his work despite everything. Crisp!
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Thank you Varsha. Glad you liked it.
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Served him right. Loved this story. Well written.
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Thank you for reading.
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Quite the cliff hanger! Can’t wait for the next …..
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Thank you Sunitha. The next is up. Just posted it an hr ago.
https://soniasmusings.com/2018/09/04/the-steps-that-fostered-a-friendship-for-life/
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Great story, Sonia. Short and chilling. This is the first of your posts for #MyFriendAlexa that I am reading. Plan to return for more. #JaiSReads
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Good to see you here Jai. Thanks for reading.
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Interesting story. You have maintained the suspense. Will read other parts as well to know the plan of Mir.
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This was a flash fiction that ended here. There are two more on this photo prompt – one fiction and another the real story behind the steps. You will find in the category of My Friend Alexa. Thank you for reading.
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Wonderfully narrated story indeed! The surprise element was intact till the end.
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Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it.
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Nice one
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