Amay inhaled the fresh air with a feeling of nostalgia. Looking at the hills through the window, his eyes brimmed with tears. He was back home. He remembered his childhood spent amidst luxuries in a plush Government bungalow. But his father had died of lung cancer when Amay was barely five.
His mother had been employed by the same organization on sympathetic grounds but they had to vacate the bungalow. With the meager salary, they could only afford this small house on rent. Amay had grown to love the slopes, hills, and fields in the surrounding. He kept excelling in academics and his school supported him through scholarship.
Seven years back, he had made it to one of the top medical colleges. Despite some earnings through private tuitions, financial constraints would have shattered his dreams hadn’t his mother taken up odd jobs to support him.
Dr. Amay Mhatre had returned as a doctor in this town hospital. He recollected the stunned looks of the interviewing panel when he had asked for a posting here instead of a metro city. But Amay knew that his mother felt a sense of belonging here and for him, her happiness was the biggest priority.
(200 words)
This is the 5th post written as part of the #MyfriendAlexa campaign as per my theme ‘Shades of Perception’. You can read the other piece of fiction based on the same photo prompt here and the first three posts here.
For this challenge, I am using four photos as prompts to weave two flash fiction stories and one real story behind the picture. This is my second picture prompt.
sonia di,I demand this to be printed and you as an author.These aren’t just writing,it is a masterpiece,every word is a universe in itself.I am becoming your fan.I am very glad I am.
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Neha, your words have already made my day. Someday I hope to bring this out as a collection of short stories. Thank you for the kind words always.
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I usually side with logic, but I can sympathize with Amay’s sentiments here. Another well written post. Keep them coming, Sonia.
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Thank you Varad for reading . Everytime I see your comment on a post of mine, it tells me something insightful.
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When passion and devotion directs a person’s career rather than money, only then can they make such incredible decisions.
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Absolutely right. And I am sure that the decision will be proved right. Thank you for reading.
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Often old memories call you back and you feel nostalgic and content at the same time.
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And sometimes they lead to some wonderful decisions. Thank you for reading.
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Woah! What a beautiful tiny tale of Amay and relationship with his mother. So many emotions in just 200 words. Sonia I am becoming a fan of your writing… Lovely
#MyFriendAlexa #gleefulreads
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Dipika, you have no idea how much these words mean to me. Thank you for the kind words.
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Beautifully worded like always Sonia. Keep them coming!
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Thank you Prerna for reading.
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It’s amazing how you weave different stories from the same picture. This story will touch many hearts. Parents go to a great extent in shaping our career and we should never forget that.
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I am experimenting with these photo prompts and I am so happy that you think that they are shaping well. Thank you for reading.
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Nice story with great buildup. I liked the end mothers happiness is the biggest priority.
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Absolutely right. Thank you for reading.
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I liked the way you got your story through in such small length. Indeed stories like these with happy endings make me happy. Cheers!
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I’m so glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful story
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Thank you for reading.
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Great choice by Amay. Not many young people of our generation return to their roots. Instead they just look forward to soar high, which isnt bad, but coming back to one’s roots is humanity on another level. #MyFriendAlexa #LiveItYoungReads
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I guess this story is partly inspired by my own decision to move back. Thank you for making me relate to this. Glad you liked it.
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As always, very well written, Sonia 🙂 … we can relate to the character so well…
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Thank you for always been encouraging Jayanthi.
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Well written! Keep posting them 🙂
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Thank you for reading
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Thank you for reading.
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You have a knack for weaving beautiful short stories. We do need more people like Amey to bring about a change in the world.
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Thank you Sudha for the kind words. People like Amay bring the goodness alive.
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Beautiful story, Sonia, not only because of the excellent narration (that you are a master at), but also because of the relationship Amay shares with his mother. The first 3 posts were of the staircase, the last one was the same photo and this one too! If I remember correctly, you are doing 4 stories on each prompt, isn’ it?
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Anshu thank you for always being so encouraging of my work. There are three posts against each photo prompt. The third one for this photo will be posted by tomo
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Reading now! 🙂
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This one touched my heart.
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It takes some talent to come up with different stories on the same prompt. It’s great to read your stories, Sonia. Well written, as always
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When a writer of your caliber says this, my day is made. Thank you Priya for reading.
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Short yet beautiful story! I have already become fan of your writing! Keep writing! hugs.
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Thank you so much for the kind words Surbhi. They mean a lot
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Lovely write up Sonia. We need many more doctors who do this! Service as a doctor is much needed in today’s world.
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So true Jayanthy. Thank you for reading.
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It’s an art to be able to weave completely different stories using the same picture prompt…and you have nailed it Sonia. Beautiful story of grit, hope, value system and love.
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You are too kind Kalpana. I’m really happy that you like this series.
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Sometimes the roots run deeper than we can fathom from the surface. Lucky is the mother who’s got the son who cares for her. Good one Sonia.
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I agree with you. Thank you for reading.
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